Lonely Still...
Lonely StillSoftly....you whisper my nameTenderly....you touch my faceLongingly....you gaze into my eyesLovingly....you caress my skinBreathlessly....I whisper your nameAchingly....I reach for...
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aww ,, so sad.. huggs Sioux, you expressed it wonderfully..and the longing could really be felt. Sometimes the hurt never really goes away... can relate. Beautifully written.Mystic ~Mystic~"I'm...
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loneliness is such an overwhelming emotion ... these things that haunt. such sadness, sioux ... eloquently captured ...
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-Ouch. Well done with this write Sioux, emotions in it very well conveyed.Po"You will close your eyes, in order not to see, through the glass,The evening shadows making faces,Those snarling...
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Ure words pierced through me, very very slowly, deliberately. They bled me till I longed to hold U beautiful sorrow, U can make even suffering appear precious, wow. great read my princess~hugs~PS- I...
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This reminds me of someone who can't get someone out of her mind and heart. One that made a definite impact with infinite remorse. Great sorrow mixed with memories of a love that has passed. william
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Oh my, sioux, this is full of so much feeling, so sad yet beautiful despite the pain; this hits deep, this hits deep......enjoyed (hugs)
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Thank you all so much for your very kind and understanding replies...it was just "one of those" days....sioux
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Oh my!This one breathes pain and sorrow - loneliness can be so toxic.All things pss - this will too."Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on...
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Awww..so sad, sioux. Thank goodness that "those days" don't last forever. If they did i'd be in biggggg trouble! Chin up ~Alaura ~Listen to your heart, but listen closely....it often whispers~
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Princess ...nicely done!! How can you be so lonely surrounded by all these beautiful poems you write?lol....mark
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Poignant and touching, Sioux. Sad, but very nicely done. Yours, DarkI am filled with Darkness and with Light
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